The feedback I gave Kaitlyn on the second writing project were things like she needs to fins a quote to help back up what she is saying, or when she was talking about the Pollan essay I told she that maybe she could try and find another pattern between her peers that she chose to write about and the Pollan essay and you can see that in the last comment I left her on her essay. As we went along in the review process I think everyone’s ability to review peers work grew. Before I came into this class I could not read threw a peers project and help them revise it because I did not know what I was looking for while we were reviewing. Once we talked about the review process and what you should be looking for to help your peers out helped me a lot to make decisions of my peer’s work.
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